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Improving essay writing skills -

comparing the effects of written and verbal feedback in Animal

Biology undergraduates

Dr Ashley Le Vin

School of Life Sciences,

University of Glasgow

Importance of feedback

Feedback can assist students in reflecting on and improving future assignments (Fry et al., 2003). However, although students want feedback (O'Donoǀan et al.,

2001), this doesn't mean they read andͬor understand it (Gibbs

& Simpson, 2004; Orsmond & Merry, 2010). Feedback needs to be understandable and we need to get students to engage with it in order to benefit.

Essay writing exercise

Students given a choice of 10 essay titles

Given an essay writing lecture and an essay

planning session

One month to write a 1500 word essay

Essay marked and written feedback sent to

student, then student meets with marker for verbal feedback session

Students then had at least 2 weeks to rework and

complete a second draft

Written feedback

How easy was the feedback to understand? (5= very easy)

9 76% rated written feedback a score of 4 or 5 (Av. = 4.02)

Comments from students:

9Each comment was at the point in the essay that needed modification,

it was simple and understandable. It was useful to look back at written feedback to remember what was said in the verbal feedback

9Some of it was vague - comments left of just Η͍͍͍͍͞

9Could have said what parts were good and why

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Verbal feedback

How easy was the feedback to understand? (5= very easy)

983% rated written feedback a score of 4 or 5 (Av. = 4.34)

Comments from students:

9It was great to bounce new ideas off each other

9I could discuss areas which needed to be improved and explore the best ways to improve them

9Clarification of written feedback

9There was a lot of information - I should have written it all down to be honest

9Wasn't much on what was good and should be kept

Do the two feedback methods compliment one another/are both necessary? (5 = very necessary)

975% rated this a score of a 4 or a 5 (Av. = 4.2)

Approachability of staff

91% of students felt more confident to approach staff in the future for feedback

Comments from students:

9Staff are approachable and easy to talk to. Give useful answers to questions asked.

9It's not of something I would have done before but now I feel much more confident in both emailing and approaching staff.

9Very helpful for improving work. Will not hesitate to ask for feedback if needed.

9Depends who the staff member is, some are welcoming, some are not so much.

Increasing confidence in essay writing

Paired t-test; t = -10.5, d.f. = 65, P <0.001

73% of students rated their confidence in writing a better quality

essay a 4 or 5 (5 = very confident)

How to improve the exercise?

Maybe a forum where you

could ask either peers or lecturers

Essay feedback from more

than 1 member of staff.

Feel like there was a large

discrepancy between markers

All feedback should be

given at the same time, not fair that some people had whole week more to write the essay than others (Nittono et al., 2012)

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We should continue with this essay skills

exercise.

Encourage students to use Moodle forums -

peer evaluation/help (perhaps set up one for each essay topic).

Improve on positive feedback to students.

Emphasise the importance of reflecting on

feedback on other coursework.

Thanks!

Any questions?

Your thoughts?

Your experiences of

feedback?

How can we get

students to reflect and engage with feedback more widely to aid their future work?

References

FRY, H., KETTERIDGE, S. & MARSHALL, S. 2003. A handbook for teaching and learning in higher education, London, Kogan Page.

GIBBS, G. & SIMPSON, C. 2004. Conditions under which assessment supports students' learning. Learning and Teaching in Higher Education, 3-31.

NITTONO, H., FUKUSHIMA, M., YANO, A. & MORIYA, H. 2012. The Power of Kawaii: Viewing Cute Images Promotes a Careful Behavior and Narrows Attentional Focus. PLoS ONE, 7, e46362.

O'DONOVAN, B., PRICE, M. & RUST, C. 2001. The Student Experience of Criterion-Referenced Assessment (Through the Introduction of a Common Criteria Assessment Grid). Innovations in Education and Teaching International, 38, 74-85.

ORSMOND, P. & MERRY, S. 2010. Feedback alignment: effective and ineffectiǀe links between tutors' and students' understanding of coursework feedback. Assessment & Evaluation in Higher Education, 36, 125-136.

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